rate_review Reviews

Aw! That was so cute! I could have been nore lemoney, but I always say that, so yeah, realy good job!

Hmm, I really do like Sora/Riku and Roxas/Axel, both pairings of which you're fantastic with, but this one, this one from the standpoint that it's made is simply mind blowing. So much more tender then you would think that the Organization members are to each other. I truly do love that business stays at the door and therein, they can have fun, play games, and love each other even without their hearts. It just shows that all of them have a deeper side and just like Saix said, Kingdom Hearts nothing, he found his heart. Love love love.

Though not a pairing a would go for, you pulled it off really well and kept me interested. You have a very good style of writing and some lovely description going on, so well done.