rate_review Reviews

You have a good story here. I would like to know what happens with Kelly and Polaski. Does Kelly find out that Polaski was killed on Halo.

I'd actually like to see more Kelly stories, she seems to be largely missed as a character in fanfiction, especialy her relationship with MC. But, either way, Here you have a great story.

....WOW. Amazing. Usually, I don't really get off on female-female pairings (A guy who doesn't get turned on by lesbian sex scenes, double-you tee eff?!), and this story is no exception...but the plot and the entire tone and skill with which this story was made was just BEAUTIFUL. I love it. 5/5

Wow, that was a VERY good story and I mean *VERY* good. Its not too often that you see a well-witten yuri story around, especially a Halo story! I would love to see another story with Polaski and John/Locklear (or both, hell that would be good, too!) and a Major Silva story getting it from a twisted Covenant would nice too. Would he be getting his "just desserts" from an Elite? A Hunter would be awesome as well, maybe even a Grunt? O.o;; Now you know I'm pretty twisted when I say 'GRUNT', but hey, you don't see too many fics out there with Grunts. I myself plan on writing an Elite/Grunt story once I get the time...

Hm, well anyway, I await further fanfictions from you in the near future! Happy writing!

Hot stuff! I'm assuming you haven't read Ghosts of Onyx still; it's great! This is a cool little story (no, not just because there's two girls). It's definitely written at a higher level, especially looking at some of the other stuff on here. I can't remember, but it sure sounds like you got all the details right too.
And yes, hunta, Polaski is dead; they are in heaven. (Hence, "Fort Redemption" and such. Clever!)

whoa, this is sooooo hard to get! Is Paloski dead?

This is really nice!! I really hope you do write a Locklear&Polaski. Polaski's a strong character, and even though Locklers a bit un-level, he's likeable for he does. But yeah great stuff! Do more! :D