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August 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is one of my favorite stories that I keep going back to. You managed to include the two best pairings in the cast, but weren't afraid to get descriptive and messy with a humorous touch. A fun read every time.
I've noticed a few typos, but those aren't enough to diminish the overall strength of the story.
I've noticed a few typos, but those aren't enough to diminish the overall strength of the story.
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September 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is so damn hot. Please, PLEASE continue!
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September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story is so hot and cute, both chapters. Great cumshots, and the girls' attitudes seem so natural, especially Serene with her "it's a plain fact"... Great scenes and I too certainly favor that third chapter the other reviewers are suggesting.
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September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please write a chapter 3! Come on...poor Lina is all left out!
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July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*chuckles* I absolutely love it! You really should update this 'cause I'm thinking, NO I know this story could get even better.
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February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooh yeah... *giggles* You know you gotta add more chapters don't you? I mean.. there's a poppulation that needs to be restored and still there is only ONE womb in these two chapters that's been filled with hot cum *chuckles, eyes twinkling* THAT can just NOT be!!
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December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooooooooh yeah... Damn I hope there's going to be part 3 in tis fic.
I just LOVE your stories so.. KEEP THEM COMING
I just LOVE your stories so.. KEEP THEM COMING