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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Except for the few mistakes, as mentioned above, it's a really nice story so far. I really like it. Keep up the good work ;)
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December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
=O Jaw dropping goodness, I loved it!
You tend to repeat yourself without noticing sometimes but thats the only flaw that I can see, AND the story is wonderful and moving in the right direction!
Keep up the great work!
-Shadow
You tend to repeat yourself without noticing sometimes but thats the only flaw that I can see, AND the story is wonderful and moving in the right direction!
Keep up the great work!
-Shadow
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December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story, but you should take some time to reread your story to catch the small mistakes you made and gives a stronger presentation