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for Portrait Of Illusions

by LangstonStorm

person Megaman-Omega
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well this fic seems to look pretty good so far...The chapters are a little short but...meh thats not a big problem. One thing is bugging me however...In your fic That doesn't seem to be how Loretta would act at all...seems more like something Stella would do but...eh your fic your personallitys. As long as there are more chapters I can't complain.

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