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Very good Suikoden fic, very good indeed. I'll definately read the sequel as well!

Nice story! The grammar isn't perfect, but the writing itself is good. Miakis is cute and it's good that she's getting some attention, especially in a sexy way. The scene where she and Faroush are hiding from Miroon is hot. But why have her be a virgin? She seems the kind of girl that would go out at least a little.

First of all thx. for the reviews, they are really appreciated ^^
and I wanted to tell you that I have the sequel in the works, which will probably a lil bit more fluffy O.o

Streti: Wow getting a review from sure is a honor, seeing that I'm a fan of your works :)
Why I made Miakis at least a technical virgin you ask? Well I thought her being the bodyguard of Lym (you know how much of a hand full that girl can be) didn't have much time to date and getting laid in the process. At least the prince got a little bit around :D

Nice little fic. I like part at the end it was funny. I hope you'll write some more.

Very well done I hope you'll write more

I loved this story! ive been looking for the prince and miakis. I don't like Lyon and the prince, it doesn't seem right to me...plus lyon is not hot and a overprotected...anyways great job i hope you continue this or make another one.

Nice job. Can't wait to see more