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January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello there, just error number one. This is obviously NC-17, not R. LOL! I know, i am an idiot. As for the story, I like it. It is indeed short, a bit to-the-point; however, it is left open for some sort of coninue should you feel it. Also, The stroy was written with care. As for the age thing, I know Tails shouldn't be 8, but I have two problems with 18. Would they really be stuck in the alternate dimension, Chris' World (REAL world) for a decade...? I was thinking like 12-14 to be honest. The other reason is Tails seems a bit of a cute little guy in my head, so I was thinking younger, but not my story, just my suggestion. Other than, this is a well done. I enjoyed reading.
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January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, it's short...
And it's different...
And it's pretty good. And Tails couldn't masturbate at 8. So it's a good thing you aged him a bit. Well done!
And it's different...
And it's pretty good. And Tails couldn't masturbate at 8. So it's a good thing you aged him a bit. Well done!