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Weeeeee....that last chap was pretty funny. Can't wait for more!

Wow. It's so awesome to see fiction here that isn't just pure smut. I mean, it's so frustrating that ff.net has so many restrictions so it's difficult to explore the sexual elements of a relationship (which are extremely important) but it also seems like ppl who post here only want to put random PWPs and never really do anything deeper. Not true always, but it seems to often be the case.

Anyway, I really enjoyed reading this. I love the way you examine Riku's insecurities. It's so interesting the way you portray the two different perspectives from Sora's general contentment and amazement at how he got so lucky as to be able to be with Riku, and then Riku's doubts and constant questions about whether their relationship is meaningful anymore and what not. It's cool because since we know it's from two different perspectives, we have no clue really how to view things. We don't know the real details of their relationship so we're not in a position to make a judgment call.

I also love the way that you handled the sibling relationship. I fully agree with your view of the portrayal of families in fanfiction. It's totally irritating, and it's so refreshing to see a more realistic portrayal of the brother sister love/hate relationship. I really liked this and I'm glade you chose to share it with us. :)

I am flattened and awed by the perverse amount of AWESOME this story exudes.

How's that? Good? ^_^

I really REALLY like this story in a sick and sadistic fluff-tastic way. I mean, yes it STARTED as a dirty little cross-dressy Rikuke fic, BUT it has EVOLVED! Better than Pokemanz...Better than ManKIND! Ja, really.

I know a fic is good when I can find awesome little one-liners within and say to myself: "I can make a t-shirt of that." Yep. And you can tell when the writer has had a meaningful and fulfilling relationship themselves. Your Sora and Riku are a bit beyond the typical teenaged overly dramatized zOMG! relationships, and yet they are not completely beyond the little dramas...It's the little things that make a realtionship interesting and, well, FUN!! WHEE!! Thanks for relating that! And you still maintain Riku's canon EMO-kid-ness without it being horribly depressing or making me want to stab him in the kidney...or any other organ...And Sora is still undeniably Sora, only older and horny...YES!!

*sigh* I heart fluff.

I can relate, I can sympathize, and I can CRAVE!! I crave more of this fantastic evolution!! MOAR!!!! I'll be waiting!! ^_^

I have to tell you, despite some grammar/punctuation errors, this is one of my favorite stories ever. No joke. I even got a dumb aff.net account to review this so you can continue doing it.

So yeah, um. I'm bad at this sort of thing, but I'm really glad to see you keeping up on this. Normally people ignore their fics and leave their readers hanging, so I'm excited to know that you plan on keeping this up and running. Here's to hoping for another awesome chapter.

Mmm...Riku in red leather pants...
-drools-
That's almost as good as Riku nekkid =]

I love this story, hope you continue soon!
^_^

I would sign in... but why? ;\

This story was actually really funny. I've had it in my favorites folder, but just saw that there was a third chapter added. Very nice.

Uke!Riku for the win.

I found this a pleasant change of pace from the norm--one-shots with no plot or character arks. If you're thinking about it, I encourage you to continue this fic, or at least this universe. I mean, I really love the depth of character you have here, and the development of them.

Probably the most moving part is in chapter 1, when Riku realizes why he’s so terrified about being submissive. I thought that was great, and then after seeing how things spun out from there . . . I’m wondering how that’s going to play out in more of Riku’s firsts. Hell, I’m amazed he held up as well as he did during the spanking and didn’t start ranting about how he was sorry for everything that happened in game one!

But I also like the play on insecurities that Sora has, and how they keep cropping up. You definitely have something here with the miscommunication/mixed signals motif! I love it, it’s just so rich and raw sometimes. But even as dark as it could be, it just keeps swinging back to fluffy and sweet before it goes too far.

And it really is nice to see Riku as uke. Keep up this fic!

Lol, this story was so funny/cute! I loved how you portrayed Riku. Great job! Hope you write more KH fanfiction!

yes!!! YES SPANK THE RUKI!!!
with a paddle!!!
(i took down the other review b/c i had been up for 3 days and my spelling bit)
and oh i showed this fic to a freind and she said it was so hot she had to go fuck her bf after reading it

*cackles maniacally* The Uke!Riku-ness, it's just sooo bloody hot! I love you so much! And yes, I believe he does deserve a good spanking for that.