rate_review Reviews

*blushes and shudders* That was incredibly well-written! I never knew that there could be so much variation to such a simple act that we writers repeat so often. You write beautifully, with so much emotion and passion. Excellent job!

has this been taken down/changed again? I've read and reviewed it before, heh, but I'll do it again. I gotta say that this story really gets me- especially the bits towards the end. it just leaves me with so many questions! I mean, I honestly can't tell if Kain does all this stuff to Raziel because it's what Kain wants to do or if he knows that Raziel wants it- and what effect does all this have on their relationship in general? heh, seriously, it seems kind of like dark-erotica throughout most of the beginning, but then just those last couple lines where Kain is content to simply sit there next to Raziel- wow, that's killer. flips the whole thing on it's head! easily one of my favorite LoK stories, if only because I seriously cannot decide just how exactly it's supposed to end.