rate_review Reviews

I still like it, but the second chapter felt a little brief, maybe even forced. Each chapter could maybe be a little more prolonged in the sex, but that's just my preference. Also, it doesn't hurt to write a little more after the sex is done, just to wrap up the chapter. Doesn't have to be anything serious, but the ends are kind of abrupt.

But hey, I'm only trying to offer constructive criticism, not complain. And is there still any chance on a threesome with Agnes and Tanya?

Thanks for the constructive criticism dude, I needed that. As for the second chapter, you were right. It was rushed, because I wasn't into underage girls. I just wrote that due to a request, and the idea came to mind. As for the Agnes, and Tanya threesome I'll eventually get around to it, but it will take awhile because I have a threesome of my own in works. Be patient. I'm still open to thoughts, and requests. So, stay tune motherfuckers!

Highly enjoyable, would read again.

I'd love to see a chapter for Mistuba, or a Tanya/Agnes catfight gone wrong (or right, depending on how you think about it)