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Wonderful, I look forward to the next part, keep it up.

Wow, love this. Have been lurking around for a while but I've never actually left a review, but seeing as I'm in love with your fic I thought that even thou I don't have very much to write, maybe it would encourage you to write more. Hopefully it worked!
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More? Please? over all an excelent (sp?) story,the only REAL problem I have is .....................(wait for it)................................................................................(wait for it...) ..................................................................................................................................... the length. It needs to be longer. As in more story. As in, how does Riku beat Ansem. As in, I'm saving a full copy of your story, in case I'm stuck off-line. As in, where the hell is Riku NOW??? He ATE the world's heart, that world is GONE, so where the HELL is he?????? I'm dieing here! Throw me a bone, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

oh, and by the way, a couple of sites for research - meo-team.com and exteremerestraints.com
there's some overlap, but... yeh.

Wonderful, I was glad to see that you updated, keep up the good work and I look forward to more.

I absolutely love your stories, I love how you incorporate so much plot into them, I am getting *almost* sick of plot-less lemon's because they only hold your interest during the duration of which you read them. This story however, holds my interest through out the day. I am constantly wondering what will happen next and I can't wait to read whatever you come up with. Just so you know, I made this account for the soul purpose of leaving you a review. I don't really write stories so I never really saw any reason to get an account but when I read your story I just had to leave a review. Great job, keep up your amazing-ness and I can't wait for your next chapter!!!

I very much enjoyed this new chapter. It was worth waiting for. Not just the trauma on Riku, but everything about it. I laughed frequently as Roxas and Axel were looting the town, and I liked that you gave the lesser Nobodies such personality. It really worked for me. And everything that went on with Riku was just wonderful...in a reading sense. It's nothing I'd want to experience of course.

You have to update again soon. I thought you had gone away and was happy to see that you updated, even if it was a few months ago. Keep it up.

Thank you for returning to life! ahem...got otta hand there...I'm totally execited about the future chapters! forgive me, but I've been stalking for later chapters for some time. I know, I know.... anyway, Ansem~Handsome kicks ass! Totally hot!!! uh oh...too long...gotta go!!! Later!!!

Maybe I'll say something coherent when I can stop laughing about this chapter. It's nice laughter, though, because it was just *funny* in so many ways. A good contrast to what happened in the last chapter with Riku.

And was that a hint that in your world at least Axel considers Loki his father? If so, is that true or just something Axel himself believes?