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Awww the ending!!! so...sooo...beautiful!! I hope the next words are : and they lived happily ever after, and since Axel's love was returned, he remained human! xD Oh! that was B-E-A...UTIFUL!
*marries you*

Hah, I admit, when I saw the title and summary I though "Um...this is going to be pretty terrible but I'm bored anyway, so..."

But I was pleasantly surprised. Very good job so far, well written, and Axel is just so adorable. Now I miss my own doggy...I mean, not that he'll turn into a man eventually and we'll...*cough*

Yeah. Write more soon!

I'm in such deep love with your story!!!! its very original and so cute!!! I want a dog like that!!!! well to be more specific i want THAT dog!!! *cough* anyways i can't wait for the next chap !!! so plz update soon or else i will kill you slow and painfully!!! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA anyways update soon!!! n.n

So cute! but uh? next's the last?! Awww hope it's long, I'm sure enjoying this!! Thanks for updating and I'll be looking forward to the next one! ^^

Omg, I love you. Inu mo Arukeba is one of my favorite yaoi manga, and Axel/Roxas one of my OTP's. This is so kickass.

I find it funny that Roxas is just a liiiittle more freaked out by this whole thing that Ukyou was XD Axel's a lot like Kuro, though ^^

Oh, and I don't mean to be picky, and this doesn't really matter, but isn't the translation of Inu mo Arukeba "If dogs could also walk" not "Man's best friend"? Sorry ^^u I'm just a bit weird about those things XP

But, really, this is so great! I can't wait for more >.<

*goes to re-read Inu mo Arukeba (the manga)* XD

~Telgar

XD

Oh this is sooooooooo cute!

Keep up with this!

I have TOTALLY read that manga... and bought it as well. So I was really excited when I saw this! Especially since you write so well, which is a rarity on this site. There is actual PLOT and good grammar and so I must applaud you. Thank you for re-invigorating my faith in fanfiction writers, especially for /this/ fandom on /this/ site.

Anyways, good start with the first chapter. Nice and pleasantly long with Roxas' reaction truly believable. And Axel is just so damn cute. I would love to see a picture of him in that form. I'll leave another review on the next chapter.

Great work!

Yet another great chapter. Wonderfully done. I am enjoying how you portray it from Axel's POV. It fits perfectly with his KHII character and yet also unique in that he is a "dog-boy" as Roxas so elegantly puts it. I am definitely looking forward to the last chapter.

yay for another chapter! ^^
Hmm Roxas seem to be opened up more to Axel now xDD and Axel is forever cuddly and sweet ^^
hmm, well done with this chapter ^^
i will see you again in chapter 3 xD

Yay!
Awww I'm sooo in love with this fic!
I really can't wait until you post the next chapter!
If you need help proofing it I can help you too : )

~Elli