rate_review Reviews

0-0! i find myself a little speechless. though, i feel you should continue this story.

I like it how you have those drop down menues

It add a bit more to the flavour of what Link is thinking too.

That was HOT!!! Please continue.

Well, this is an okay fic so far. Despite it pretty much being a rape, which I'm personally not too keen on, the lemon scene was very nice. The problems I see is the way Link described pretty much everyone as 'un-fuckworthy' as you put it, and the aggressive attitude he has (calls pretty much everyone ugly, bitches, pig-faced) makes me wonder how far you can take this.

Anyway, I'll be waiting for the next chapter. It's your story, but if you could change his attitude a bit that would be great...