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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was great! I'm looking forward for the Lloyd/Sheena/Colette threesome. I'm pretty ok with the foursome thing.
So please, continue with the story "Beach".
So please, continue with the story "Beach".
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April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're really talented, so much that you make all the incest pairings really interesting, like, with far more potential than Kratos/Lloyd ever had. I'm always in support of people who can coherently write the more out-there pairings, so I'm all for you keeping it up! Likewise with Zelos/Seles, you really have a knack for that. The cookie thing was kinda weird, but it was a new kind of reading experience, so I welcome it!
I will say, though, Genis/Presea is really ordinary and overdone. If you want that foursome together, I'd prefer a Raine/Presea and Regal/Genis focus just to keep shaking things up like you have with your series (and though Lloyd/Sheena and Lloyd/Colette are really common pairs, I don't think I've seen anyone do something so cool as to put them in a threesome, so I look forward to that!). Though that's just my bias talking.
I will say, though, Genis/Presea is really ordinary and overdone. If you want that foursome together, I'd prefer a Raine/Presea and Regal/Genis focus just to keep shaking things up like you have with your series (and though Lloyd/Sheena and Lloyd/Colette are really common pairs, I don't think I've seen anyone do something so cool as to put them in a threesome, so I look forward to that!). Though that's just my bias talking.
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April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Waaah! *-* You know I worship you, right?! This little fic was a good start to my day~
Zelos is so sweet, bringing cookies to Seles~ She's really a lucky girl (ahahah).
I wouldn't mind reading some more Zelos/Seles fluff, (I mean, more romance and less lemon would be good too - I'm such a sucker for romance!) specially how would they cope when they will be faced with revealing their relationship to the group... Eh eh eh, that'd be amusing~ *sounds freaky*
Although, I have to say the cookie scene was a bit awkward... Because cookies' bits would be then supposed to irk a lot in those areas. ^^;; But I guess kinkyness is a trademark with Wilder lineage.
The last scene, Seles with half biscuit in her mouth... That made me go "AWWWWW" in cuteness. vVv
Zelos is so sweet, bringing cookies to Seles~ She's really a lucky girl (ahahah).
I wouldn't mind reading some more Zelos/Seles fluff, (I mean, more romance and less lemon would be good too - I'm such a sucker for romance!) specially how would they cope when they will be faced with revealing their relationship to the group... Eh eh eh, that'd be amusing~ *sounds freaky*
Although, I have to say the cookie scene was a bit awkward... Because cookies' bits would be then supposed to irk a lot in those areas. ^^;; But I guess kinkyness is a trademark with Wilder lineage.
The last scene, Seles with half biscuit in her mouth... That made me go "AWWWWW" in cuteness. vVv
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April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for your review!
I am going to add a LOT of ZelosxSeles fluff into the next chapter of beach, with a bit of lemon, as well as another new fluffy story for this adorable couple! (one where they reveal their relationship to the others... good idea!)
Thank you again!
I am going to add a LOT of ZelosxSeles fluff into the next chapter of beach, with a bit of lemon, as well as another new fluffy story for this adorable couple! (one where they reveal their relationship to the others... good idea!)
Thank you again!