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for Ruination

by wickedorin

person Anon
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I believe I read and reviewed this on FF.net
Well, Second-time 'round and it still makes me feel all jittery.
I simply burble with happiness at Demyx's refreshingly cruel portrayal (One does get tired of Demyx as a six-year old- even if it is cute)
person Anon
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damnit! it was HERE!- Not FF!
I have to keep my sites straight.
'ss still shiny
person LadyDa
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
<(-x-)>
I like your OOC Demyx- although, that's more the way I picture Marluxia thinking.
It's refreshing seeing him portrayed like this- as, all too often, he's portrayed as an annoying little goody-two-shoes.
And I have a sick thing for Uke!Axel anyhow.
person Anonymous
schedule June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A tasty little psychopath indeed. I like your Demyx much better than the "whipped-puppy" stereotype going around.

My one issue is with the Marluxia fantasy, which was of the Alternate Universe variety. Admittedly, I like the thought of rock star Marluxia much better than-- another stereotype-- "drag queen Marluxia", but surrounded by the lovely canon of the other Nobodies, I think it might have been more appropriate for Demyx to think of tying him up with his own garden hoses and doing him in the flowerbed.

Otherwise, it's a deliciously disturbing fic and hits all my wrong buttons just right. Thank you for an interesting evening!

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