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July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's better than some, worse than others. The beginning was excellent; I love how Seifer basically yanks Hayner around. The lemon itself and the end were (in my opinion) too sappy for these two-- Hayner gives in too easily and Seifer is downright lovey-dovey in the later parts of the story, when I think there should be more snark and fighting going on.
Overall, I found it a pretty good read.
Overall, I found it a pretty good read.
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May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY that was hot i really liked it!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was very good.
There just aren't enough Seifer/Hayner stories out there!
Good work.
^_^
There just aren't enough Seifer/Hayner stories out there!
Good work.
^_^