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I really enjoy this Fic I love it a lot I hope you continue with it cuz I do want to see all the pairings the one I'm mostly interested in Ike Ena ike X Jill Ike X Mist Ike X astrid great job keep up the good work I'm looking forward to see you finishing the Fic.

Brilliant.

Ooooh! I cxan't WAIT to read the next chapter! A whole bunch of girls fucking Ike? That's SURE to be a good read!

This was a very good story. I hope you finish it. I could definitly see improvment from chapter to chapter. I could definitly see Ike with just about anyone. Girl and guy both; I mean he's the freakin comander(authority). Hell, he could get whoever he damn well pleased. This was an interesting story. I really liked the Illyana(desiese since birth idea). It kinda puts a fictional idea on why she has a large appitite. Anyway, I really hope you finish this. It doesn't decierve to be forgoton.

With much respect,



The Prince of Madness

You know, for a PWP thats just supposed to be a big turn on, everyone was amazingly in character. I love how the smut actually pertains to parts of the storyline and even though Ike is being a pimp and screwing all the ladies, I think it's adorable that he cares for them.

I think you did a marvelous job writing this story! I like how you worked the game's storyline into the fic, it makes things flow really well and gives it a nice touch. A few grammar errors, very minor, but still noticeable in my opinion. Still, you did a good job portraying the characters' personalities, though the lemons in the first chapters seemed a bit too short, it looks like you more or less remedied the problem with Ilyana's chapter.

I hope you intend to finish this story, coz if you do, I look forward to seeing more. ^^

As for suggesting pairings... Well, you already did my favorites (IkexMia and IkexIlyana were ones I was partial to myself) and any other suggestions have already been made, so I've nothing really to add.

Keep it up. ^^

I see, so in order, then...I look forward to this. For the ladies' sake. Man, and we started with one of the hottest ones, too...

Chapter 3 was good, but there were still some grammatical problems. Minor stuff. Great work, though.

You need to continue this.

It is a graet (AETHER) series and I will die if you stop.

seriously update