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January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you, my friend, are flippin hilarious. Axel and demyx sound like me and my friend....sumtimes. ANYWHO, this is sum nice piece of a-uhhhh fanfiction. yeeep. All your author notes are hilarious too. I've noticed you knwo some pretty rich people. I got ...pj pants for christmas. *shrugs* they're good for jogging too....*nods*. SO i hope you get another chapter up whenever or ill have to do...something...bad. =.=
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January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The sex was definitely fun and interesting (and hot!), but the characters are a bit lacking. Did I mention that the sex is hot?
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June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omfg!! when Axel said! "“By the way, you do know that it’s illegal for you to drink alcoholic beverages, my dear sixteen-year-old?”
that killed me so bad!!!! xDDDDD Axel... when he said "dear sixteen year old" = TOTALLY PEDOFILE!!! xDD
it's so cute!!! UPDATE!
that killed me so bad!!!! xDDDDD Axel... when he said "dear sixteen year old" = TOTALLY PEDOFILE!!! xDD
it's so cute!!! UPDATE!
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June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
kay i love this story!!! and i cant wait for you to update it!! all the glorious types of sex: kinky ice play, fridge abuse, bathroon sex, and hot car sex!! WOW i will also now have the inage of cloud and leon togethter when ever i hear the bad touch song! great work!! XD
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June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why are all your characters acting like they're horny 12 year old idiots? There's no unique distinction between them. They're all from the same poorly thought out cookie cutter.