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October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
my gawd!!! I love your descriptions of teh cock. throbbing pole? that's awesome!~
this story is making me soo horny. Please write more so i can be horny again.
this story is making me soo horny. Please write more so i can be horny again.
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another brilliant chapter and I was suprised you didn't make Ashley pregnant. Still, love how your writing Jack and I hope another chapter is posted soon.
Peace and Pies
Peace and Pies
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September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yet another wonderfully written chapter. I appreciate the Krashley pairing more and more with each new chapter. Update soon! ~_^
-M.E.
-M.E.
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September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn, I didn't even see this update. Great job as usual. And unfortunately I have no idea where the names originated from. So no cookie for me. T_T
-M.E.
-M.E.
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August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Let me guess the names come from the silent hill series, as in heather mason (sh3), harry mason (sh1) and james sunderland (sh2). awsome refrances, do i get a cookie now?
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August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes, another chapter and it's great to see them getting along so well. Looking foward to seeing how things develop now they're closer to civilisation. :D
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August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I'm loving this story. It's well written, exciting and Ashley and Jack are dealt with expertly. In short, I would love to see more, especially with Ashley's growing plaga. Please continue and I appologise for not reveiwing before. Bad me. Any hoo, it's genius.
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Spoonerism :D
Peace and Pies
Spoonerism :D
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August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Incredible, ay first i thought that there was no way Krauser and Ashley could work, but you pulled it off, and such a serious relationship, id say you extrapolated his character well, since it wasnt very well defined as well, and ashley is almost totally in character. however, i would like to know what happened of leon and his plaga, and to see him make an appearance later. all in all, a very engaging work, worth the time spent reading it. Keep up the good work and try to update soon!
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July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice! This one of my favorites stories on AFF!
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July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've been up to par with your story and may I say this is one phenominal job. The element that really caught my eye is your interpretation of Krauser outside the battlefield. You've got some skill there. And its really a shame that unique stories I've read don't get the credit that they truly deserved.
Please write more! I'm very much interested.
~M.E.
Please write more! I'm very much interested.
~M.E.