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July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo. 0_o More? Please? Pretty please with sugar on top? Or yaoi if you don't care for sugar? I usually don't like reincarnation fics but this is done a lot different. Any hope for an update?
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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I love these next life-fics. This seems really good, update soon? :D
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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please continue?
I like the style you used for the prologue--probably won’t work for the main bulk of the fic, but it was nice and intense for the beginning.
Your prose were pretty sharp, and there were very few grammatical/spelling errors. Makes me wonder if you even used a beta. If not, kudos to you!
When you put up a little more of this, I’ll be able to give a more detailed review.
I like the style you used for the prologue--probably won’t work for the main bulk of the fic, but it was nice and intense for the beginning.
Your prose were pretty sharp, and there were very few grammatical/spelling errors. Makes me wonder if you even used a beta. If not, kudos to you!
When you put up a little more of this, I’ll be able to give a more detailed review.
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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow great story!!!! i cant wait for them to meet!!! is axel having dreams like roxas? you should do one chap of axel pov before they met! ohh i will die if you dont update soon!! and if i die is a review you will lose so plz update soon!!!