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October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your story is pretty good, but the spelling and lack of capital letters bug me a bit.
You should do a spelling check in the program Word, or ask someone to edit it.
I like the story so far, and I hope that the lack of reviews and low rates don't discourage you. :]
You should do a spelling check in the program Word, or ask someone to edit it.
I like the story so far, and I hope that the lack of reviews and low rates don't discourage you. :]
schedule
August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Man this is a good story i would like to see the 3 chapter, the only thing i would say is a little me deteal and thats really it!!1
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August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cool story, I love the Dante x Trish relationship