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by RideHimCowboy

schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love how you describe Pyramid Head, Butcher smock and all ;) I also like how you deal with James and his guilt, it's all very true to the game! It should have happened in the game I don't care what anyone says heh. Any chance you'll write more?
person kspence
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love a good Pyramid-head fic and this was a very nicely done one-shot. Just a minor thing I'd point out, your writing is powerful enough already and you don't need to use those CAPITALS for emphasis at all. And as a major point, I'd love to know why PH still, um 'visibly unsatisfied' following his encounter with James - I hope you'll be writing a follow up where they get together again. Thanks very much for posting!
person Madhater
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh i like it would be nice to see more to this cant wait if their is loved it. ^_^ not enough of M/M in silent hill i mean most of the games have just guys how can a game like this not have alot of M/M stories, oh well hope to see more of this.^_^

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