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for Innocence Lost

by LotornoMiko

person Rezalda
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sob* That was so sad. I mean, it was sweet, but sad at the same time. Kind of romantic, too, until there very end, where I was like "OMG Loki you BITCH!!!" But I should have seen it coming. :( He is the trickster god, after all.

Just one nitpick. It's "Dragon Orb," not "Dragon's Orb."

I apologize that for the most part, the only concrit I can offer is nitpicks or spelling/grammar mistakes.

~Celia

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