rate_review Reviews

I love this story, the way you write is so captivating. Keep up the good work!

Sweeettt, i got a reply to my review! Lol =) Anyway, I'm glad you updated today ^^ I woke up this morning all groggy and tired and decided to look at the ficts, and what do you know, I was greeted by this BRIGHT SHINY CHAPTER! Hehe... Ohh, Word's weird o.O I've never had that happen to me, maybe there's a way for you to turn off the hyphenation thing. It doesn't matter too much though, it doesn't stop me from reading :3

Great that you edited the prologue a bit =3 Now i have an excuse to tell my sister that I need to stay on to read your stories more xD I'll just say, "Sorry, I need to go see what she changed >D" and reread it alllll over again! I honestly can't get enough of your fics, they're just so... awesome! :D

Anyway, I await the next chapter!! I'll check every day xD

Oohhh this was so awesome! I really love your writing, and it was your other fic, The Walk, that brought me to this fic =3 I'm so glad that i discovered you, because it really would've been sad to miss talent such as yours!

I like how you portray the characters, though Sora may be sort of OOC. Seeing as it's an AU, that's understandable =3 But its also nice to see some angsty sora! =D Anyway, I hope you update sooner!

Also, just for some CC so that this comment doesnt become pointless, when you're writing I notice you put hyphens in some of your words where they shouldn't be there. I'm not sure if you have a Beta, and personally I don't think it's much of an error, but I suggest you get a beta anyway to review your work :3 It's always great to have someone look over it before posting! ... not that i have anything post-worthy like you lol :)

ANYWAY, i hope you update SOOONNN because i'll die if you dont xD Your fics PWN THE WORLD! I phail at writing =3 So.. GOGOGOPOST!! *i'm not impatient. ahem.*