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September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think it's very good. it could be a little longer but whatever. UPDATE SOON....
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September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Niiiice.... Sucks thst dem. had to call right in the middle of it... >.<
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September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It has a good plot, and lots of potential. Look into getting a beta maybe if you don't already have one. And also, is the tense of the verbs correct? Maybe they are but they seem a little odd to me. Other than that, I like where it's going.