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October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just beautiful! I loved it and I'm glad you aren't finished!
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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nicely written story, but I found it odd that you have Sloane compare his experience with Claire to women of his own race, and have him find orc woman bulky and repulsive. I mean, as an orc wouldn't he think humans are strange and different, because they don't have the qualities of woman he's used to sleeping with? I think the story was going well until that point.
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October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol, this is better than finding a quick 20 in the wash :P
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September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aaarrrggghhhh, what is it???? What's behind the door??? come on, cough up! I would usually tell you how interesting and entertaining this chapter is at this point, and how your writing flows so smoothly, but I can't because I'm too busy wondering what's behind the bloody door!!! lol, I eagerly await an update!