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November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hm, this could be interesting. 's been a while since a a fic in the Zelda section caught my attention. Your writing style was a bit direct in this one.. I kind of felt like there were certain things you wanted to note and the transition between those was a bit visible. Descriptions were ok though. I'll check back to this one from time to time - so keep up the good work! ^_^