rate_review Reviews

I'm glad I finally got to read this; I enjoyed it. The sex was very sensual and it was an interesting set-up. I could see Alessa, had she grown up, wanting a sexual situation that she could control, yet she's a good person and can't help wanting someone with a little decency which Maria does have here. I actually had quite a bit of sympathy for Alessa here.

Rare pairing and you handle it well. Sensual and the tone was gritty, yet soft. It had a urban feel to it, and it's probably one of the details I noticed even before the intimacy. I thought you did the characterization well on both women, and I like you kept Alessa with a bit of innocence about her. Unique couple and I hope to see more. :)


~M