schedule
November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very well written. You kept both men in character, which can be hard to do at times, and your writing style flows very smoothly.
I look forward to updates.
I look forward to updates.
schedule
November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A gorgeous start to a story definitely relevant to interests; it's nice to see some eloquent pieces of writing in this section. I like the way you've worked the proverb into the chapter and story, as well. I'll be checking on this one regularly for updates.