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Hello, your fic is great, I like the couple Dante x Patty continues!!!

More? I'm intrigued. I like it so far.

Other than some minor grammer work, pretty good start. ;-) I've seen other fanfics with horrendous grammer and blocks of pure text per paragraph with no breaks, so know your story is being judged mainly for its subject matter than your writing skills. Stuff like this is bound to get on people's blacklist. The best you can do is respect their decision and do your own thing. ;-) I'm not a fan of pedo myself but I'm a very liberal person who believes that artists/writers alike should feel free to write what they want to write. Normally, I'd add, 'and be prepared to accept any consequences for it.' However, this site was created for stories like this. The only consequences happening here are the ones people who don't take the site's warning message seriously.