rate_review Reviews

This was really good. Are you going to write more? I'd like to read more of this pairing from you.

That was great! You kept up the development of the plot without taking away from the smut! I hope you plan on adding to it. I think it has a lot of potential if you work it right. ^-^

I'm looking forward to see where this is going. I like the little references to Phantom Hourglass (seriously how long did it take him to install a jumping mechanism on that ship?!)There's a few spelling mistakes that could be corrected, but overall it seems solid. Hopefully they don't just start going at it until they have a reason. Maybe also find a way for Link to give consent...since he can't talk and all of that.