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Ok, you had a nice unique plot, your sentence structure and spelling weren't that bad, puncuation could use just a little work. Overall it was an easy read, and I appreciate that; however, there is one thing that I have to yell at you about...Rotties are not killers, they were not bred to be killers, and are the best dogs in the world to have. Yes they're a breed used to guard homes, but they're the sweetest dogs ever unless faced with a threat to their people. As a matter of fact if you have young children and a Rottie then the dog tends to look after them like they would their own pups. Now I am not saying that you can't train one to attack on command,because unfortunately you can and sometimes bad breeding can screw with their temperment; however, this can happen with any type of dog... and a terrier type is actually more likely to bite because they were bred to kill rats centuries ago.next time check your facts before you assume something about a breed. Sorry about the lecture, but I really hate the bad press that the less cuddly looking dogs get.

poor u, i know teachers can be putas but as long as you act like you care they lubber ya. bwuahaha. this story is kinda weird. like its sad but then sexy....den sad..... i like riku's persona. and the kids!! too cute! =DDDDD Gab should like.....jump off my suicide window and Axel... *sobs dramatically* it feels so incomplete without Roxas! Axel as bottom is weird cus he's like.....a tree. realllllllly taaaaallllll.but it doesnt bother me much =}}}}}} Axel's so NICE...not sarcastic or loud or annoying or angry or weird or fruity..... list goes on. but man, keep on writing.

roxas is dead???? nnoooooo!! anyway, i like axel. he's so pimp. i like ur story although im not into angst...at all. i love happy ending everything. even tho nothin is like that these days. but a prequel sounds awesome. if u have time. *shudders* i have finals.... i hate finals...

:0 ah violence, such a rare thing i read in stories. I loved every word of this chapter, it was very long awaited.

thanks for updating!