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for Accidental Infatuation

by crymsonpassion

person Tsukio
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. I found this yesterday and was reading it. I finished it today and all I have to say is....wow. Yes, this is completely different from what I would normally read and I'm very glad that I found it! I'm loving it so far and I will keep watch for another update!
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving the story so far. I have a twin brother and the arguments between Sora/Roxas and Kairi/Namine hit close to home for me. Another thing that I like is the different idea to the story. I can't wait to see what happens later on. Keep up the good work!
person KitsuneAi
schedule August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
=] It's a real pleasure reading this fic. I hope you continue. The situations some of the characters are in are quite unique, like Riku being blind. And I just find their personalities amusing and delightful.

I'll be waiting with baited breath for your next update. ^^
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ugh, I'mma sick or I'd give gud reviewz.

I likes. You has minor gammers---well is more spellings then grammar since is 1st person Sora . . . But dat's otay, no-one's perfect.

Your characterization is very nice, and funnies. Is bestest part of storiez . . . . @.@

That said, no make teh Kairi bitchy. Too much Kairi-bashing going around. Needs more HappyGoodFriend!Kairi. But mopey is okay . . . for a few days. Sort of like, 'AGAIN?!?!?!' reaction. After that, maybe laugh at herself for having 'super-gaydar'. If she's all mopey and 'grr' for a week, the she will hurt peoplesz feelin's, and then she would go all super super depressed 'I'm sorry' before she could go back to being happy-friend again.

So give her a few days of, 'WWWWHHHHHHHHHHHHYYYYYYYY?!?!', and then slowly go back to happy. Yeah . . .

I go sleep now. Wishes youz both luck with next chapter and stuffs.

::Curls into ball. Hopes to ride out sickness with more stories.::
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh gosh, I totally love it!! Ohhh, Riku and Sora, yummy, and so cuuute. And I'm just waiting for Axel and Roxas to hook up! I love it all so much. Can't wait for more!
person Jen-Pan
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore the personalities the characters have, along with your style of writing. =] I hope your work schedule smooths out because I really enjoy this story. Good luck.
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:P Oh yesssss, I read that one-shot. It was too hot xD But anyway, thank you for the update! I never thought that the outcome of mom and Vexen's meeting would be allowing Roxy to stay with Sora :D Hayner is so funny! ergh, well...you wrote it, but you get my point!
person x13xlovesx8x
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heeeeeee~ <3333 All my fav pairings in this one. That makes me happy. Plus, it's simply adorable. I love the relationship between Roxas and Sora. Makes me with I had a twin. ::pouts::
person queenaoshi
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this so much! Jealous Riku was amazing, and I loved the bet at the end, it was a great way to end the chapter. Almost makes me content to wait for the next chapter. Almost. ;P
person Lauryn
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is very interesting, I'm stoked to read more! I'm glad that Roxas will be staying with Sora again... I want more Demyx! and more Soku! (Maybe some sweet Akuroku on the side)... Lol, fangirl attack, ne?

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