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October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I see what the "S" is for...this is the same point as in the other one. Interesting...
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October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoa...the SS is amazing! Such eroticism without even needing any nudity--incredible talent!
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July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You captured Lute's character fine. The story behind this was fun and it fit her. You also managed to make the erotic parts more sensual by actually including onomatopoeia for the vocalizations, which added an interesting level of perception to it that most other works don't boast. The feather was a nice touch; wasn't expecting it.
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January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Vanessa and Lute are in Fire Emblem 8, not Fire Emblem 9... 9 is Path of Radiance, 8 is Sacred Stones.