rate_review Reviews

OMG. This was AMAZING! One of the best AkuRoku's I've read. o.o; Ever. PLEASE WRITE MORE OF THEM! DX *glomps upon* I luff you!!

I like it, i've actually read all your stuff and didn't realise it untill I went to your page. i REALLY like your style basically I've kinda been looking for a style of writing like this. Keep it up.

Ally Froid,
AKA Parker Rowe

Not bad, not bad at all. Honestly, or I wouldn't have read it with the way you've got it set up. I hate reading through large chunks of text. Paragraphs are your friend.

Oh, this was your first lemon? I couldn't tell! It was very good, I liked it a lot. And, even though you had said there wasn't much to the plot, I found that it was plenty! I mean, this was a lemon, a one-shot. So, what plot there was in it, I think it was enough to build on, and that's all that matters. All in all, I thought it was really nice. Definately a story I'll be coming back to. Great job!
~Hime Suki

dammit >.< that was pretty good. you should do a smut with a plot.The descriptions were pretty sweet too. im a suckker for details. and its "wrapping" not "rapping" lol. made me think of Jay-z. but overall its hot. hope to read more of your work!