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August 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I love where this is going. I would offer some advice, but whith how well this story is going, you don't need any input from me... I hope you continue with this, because I'd really enjoy reading the next few chapters too! And thanks for writing such a great story!
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July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is really, *really* well written! Hurry and update =D
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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay. Number 1 priority? FIX. YOUR. GRAMMER! It's no fun to read if the reader can't even work our what you typed. Beyond that, the story shows promise.