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for The Birthday Surprise

by wanderingauthor

schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Always good to see your threesome in another story. ^_^ Been a while since we've heard from them but it's nice to know you still have stuff laying around with them (and the well-detailed length o.o it never ceases to amaze me).

Little lore-whore nitpicking here, you wrote "Halloween" instead of "Hallow's End".

Other than that there aren't any problems really worth mentioning that I can think of.

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