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February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Powerful . . . .
This is strong enough to stand by itself, but if it continues, then I’ll follow it.
I also think that it’s an interesting choice that Roxas (and technically Naminé) is absent from this time frame. This isn’t a bad thing, far from it, it just makes me wonder if things start to fall apart or change when they hit the scene.
But then, we don’t really need to know that, since this piece is meant to just capture a moment in their lives, not chronicle their stories.
This was very refreshing. Please continue writing.
Good Luck!
This is strong enough to stand by itself, but if it continues, then I’ll follow it.
I also think that it’s an interesting choice that Roxas (and technically Naminé) is absent from this time frame. This isn’t a bad thing, far from it, it just makes me wonder if things start to fall apart or change when they hit the scene.
But then, we don’t really need to know that, since this piece is meant to just capture a moment in their lives, not chronicle their stories.
This was very refreshing. Please continue writing.
Good Luck!