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October 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is really interesting I hope you write more
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May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You need to write more! =D
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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this, it's different. I can't wait to read more. Update soon!
Bbritishchik
Bbritishchik
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aren't you that underage chick who continually comes back after getting banned?
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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, I love this story!! You really must update it soon, I'm so excited to see what happens!
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February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! I love this! Keep it up and I can't wait till the next chapter. *smiles*
Bbritishchik
Bbritishchik
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February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
When you say "Innocents" both in the title(I assume) and throughout the story, I believe you mean to say "innocence." Innocents is the plural form of innocent - which in this context means two or more innocent people/beings - whereas 'innocence' is the state of being innocent...there is a significant difference in understanding. With that said, the story is quite interesting, albeit a bit predictable, and the only real issue I had was with the "innocents" vs. "innocence." Good Job.