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The introduction looks promising, now I can only hope it will be updated soon ;3

As always, your writing is beautiful. Clear, concise and to the point but not lacking in detail and successfully painting the picture you want to create...I wanna be just like that when I grow up! The part where she says: "Mahkania waits for no-one"....hahahah that seriously cracked me up, no joke, I laughed out loud. Such a simple line but so unexpected it seriously hit me with the whacky stick! I love her already and am eager to see what you come up with next. I have to say though, while I was stoked to see you've started another story, I'm kinda like...but what about the other one? I've been checking just about every other day for an update, like I do with quite a few of the stories on here, I really liked it, the whole nice but horrible Night Elf angle was really catchy. Are you gonna like, juggle the both of them and keep going? I hope so, I really like them both but you are such a tease, this chapter was just enough to haul me in and then you stopped! Lol, anyway, nice work, good story, I can see it's set up for some serious confrontation and there isn't much that's sexier than that...apart from Orcs with long black hair, that is haha! But I'm a bit obsessed with that... Well done!