rate_review Reviews

Oh man...I'm a bit disappointed. That was so freaking funny and good at the beginning. Right up until the part where he started getting nasty. I dunno. I get that it was labelled 'humil', but it just started out so entertainingly, I was actually laughing at the banter and the way you write, and how Leo evaluated his companions purely on perve value, I loved it. It seriously was very, very good...and then wham, it was like dr.jekle and mr. hyde and he turned into this like, REAL arsehole, when up until then it was like he was just a funny arsehole. ....or am I starting to sound like a whinging tiefling...? o.0.

Anyway, I'd just like to see the end match the first 3/4's a bit more. It was really, really very good, apart from that.