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for Kung Fu Action Theater

by Fenris30

schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah yes, the sweet satisfaction of feedback to feedback. Thanks for the e-mail, I thought of writing you back but I knew I had to read this one anyways so I might as well just wait until I had to review. Once again, you didn't disappoint, and I'll certainly agree with you on the fact that the DxV doesn't float my boat either, but then again I don't swing that way. Thank you for blessing this het-deprived section some good reading.

And for one final note: have you seen Trish in DMC4!?!? I can't really agree with you on the flat part, nope, not at all. However, her personality was given a lot less development than Lady's, and that is a little flat if that was what you were meaning.

Good job, and if you are actually writing a third installment, I'll be waiting apprehensively. Feel free to write me again too by the way, I enjoy meeting fellow writers online.

Keep it up! (Go cliche things to say!)
person OmegaX
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, with both of these, you've officially entered my list of favorite Game Het authors. I absolutely loved Beer, and this is even better. Almost all of Dante's dialogue in Beer I could easily see, and Lady's actions seem just as in character. Glad to see the Beowulf making an appearance in this chapter, even though I prefer Vergil's version of the fighting style. I can't wait to see the next installments!

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