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July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is definitely one of the best described erotic scenes that I've ever read. I also really like the idea of Fayt x Niklas very much. ^^ Please continue soon. :D
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February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I only saw a few spelling errors. Nice imagery and descriptive use, but... Ewwwwww, shota. As much as I was enjoying the flow of your writing, I'm sorry, but I won't be seeing the rest.
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November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*clamps nose*
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shota?! On my AFF?!?!
hahahah I love it yacha!
eh I actually want to see a ummm.....'older' version of our shota kid taking fate but that's me being a pervert and thinking in japanese perverted terms...again
still I want more, shota or not
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shota?! On my AFF?!?!
hahahah I love it yacha!
eh I actually want to see a ummm.....'older' version of our shota kid taking fate but that's me being a pervert and thinking in japanese perverted terms...again
still I want more, shota or not
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July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's teasing, yet descriptive. It's a good story and I love stories with those hard to find pairings like this one (I just wish there was something with Vanilla [the bunny inventor]) if you continue I'll definatly read it as soon as I see it.
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June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoa...that was awesome! It was so visual...>.> Excellent job!