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for In My Eyes

by amskitty214

person queenaoshi
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing! I really enjoy stories with the Xigbar/ Demyx pairing, so I can't wait for that! I was kinda sceptical about the Luxord /Zexion, but that was hot. I can't wait to read more!
person Akurokulove
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haahahah seems like it will get interesting~ hahahha high as a kite on the frst day of school...good job Dem aahahha
person Bbritishchik
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey you definitely got my attention. I'm not sure I like Demyx being a druggie, but it will certainly cause some good drama. Can't wait to see what happens.
person Ren
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY~!
We're Amazing~! <33
:D
person JennyTheBat
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg this story is like so cute i can't wait 4 more!
person Longiekins
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow...just wow. I'm against yaoi normally, but I just got really curious...You write really well, and I really love Kingdom Hearts, and I think you got everyone in character perfectly. Keep it up.

Sincerely, Longiekins
person Kitty Cat Uriko Mrow
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i dont liek this at all beaucze i dun like gay ppl ur so ranchy an u shuld learn how 2 riwte kthz
person Kenji
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm kind of iffy about the Zexion/Luxord pairing, but I think that Demyx being a druggie is hilarious. Could you please put in Xemnas/Sai'x soon, please? They're my favs. :) Maybe a little Sai'x/Zexy. And more bondage! Bondage = love!

And Uriko, shut your fat mouth. Nobody loves you.
person Bbritishchik
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sweet! Talk about getting right down to business! I love it! I can't wait to read the next chapter.
person JaceQuin
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Am I the first reviewer? I hope so. Ren's always the first one to review my stuff. I suppose it might help if I knew who the characters were but it seems well-written. No idea what's going on but lots of praise anyway. I look forward to Ren's over the phone extremely abridged version of Organization XIII because I can feel one coming on. Good luck with your indents. *magics some inspiration at you* Bye.

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