rate_review Reviews

Oh my! Well, that was certainly worth the few minutes it took to read. Honestly I love these two as a pairing and was pleased with your take on it. It was short but very much appreciated, thank you. KTN

Very stimulating read. It's nice to have fics like this sometimes. Porn, you know? lol, I sound like a perv. =P

It's very interesting that even though this is slash, you make a point just how masculine these two are. Instead of describing Luke as beautiful and feminine as a of of writers do sometimes(myself included) you pointed out his broad shoulders and his Adam's apple. And likewise Layton is very masculine here as well. I like the idea that not so much femininity is involved. It makes it sexier in its own way.

And so Luke finally got to see Layton without his hat. That's a great victory! And it's so cute how future Luke missed him so much. Bad future Layton! Bad!

P.S. I haven't really finished the third game yet so I'm sure there's a ton of plot twists I'm missing. Like is evil Layton really that evil? I don't know? But I'll find out for myself soon, I suppose.

Awful? Dear god, how could you call this awful! I don't even like Legal Luke and this story was just... unf hot and fantastic and yesssss.

And I loved Layton's little moment of almost thinking of a puzzle it reminded him of... before Luke quickly brought him back to reality.