rate_review Reviews

I loved this! I've been thinking more and more about pairing Hector with some of the boys in the game, and he and Eliwood make a cute couple. :)
A shame it wasn't graphic. lol
Keep writing!

I LOVE THIS. It's so well written, and really, REALLY cute. x3 The only thing I would advise is for you to separate the lines. If it's all together, it's a little hard to read.

Other than that, this was amazing. I love how you explained Hector's timidness and such. Awww. Omg. There needs to be more GOOD HectorxEliwood out there. X3

Canas... he's hilarious. I love him.


*gives tactician cookies* I do too. It really does bring up morale.

Interesting indeed...of course, the ending strikes me as a bit weird as Canas is married and has a son. He's quite likely a bit older than most of the other characters, which in my mind limits pairing opportunities.

Very cute. I wish there was some more indents in some paragraphs. Just some editing. Nice job.
Now....WHERE'S THE SEXXING?