rate_review Reviews

Heh. Compound sEx skill.

The story over all was good, but not amazing, in that I enjoyed it, but the characters still seemed a little off. I felt like more could've been done to fluff out the story a bit, but at the same time, this was pretty much just PWP with a bit of contrivance to make it feel more real. Not that that's a bad thing at all, but it misses what could come from a full blown story.

I really like this idea, it's just simply that I'd have liked to see it taken more in the context of a full story, versus an adult novella with sex being pretty much the full focus. It'd be interesting to see how all the different groups of people would react to a menage a trois forming from the three of them.

Either way, it's good entertainment, I can't deny that.

Mhmm, mhmm... hot, sexy, sweet. The perfect climax, in more ways than one.

Do tell, have you a next project in line?

That was sweet.

But when's it gonna get hard? All this UST can't be good for anyone!

You call this an update? Sheesh...

Interesting in terms of story, to be sure. But where's the sex? xD

What's next, they'll be doing it in front of strangers?

You have a knack for putting them in awkward and funny situations. Good job, and keep it up!

Sheena's so bad. It's great.

And corrupting innocent Collette! Even worse! lol

Ahh, but all that aside. You gave me a good laugh, and for that I thank you. *bows*

So random. xD

But it has its sweet and tender moments. An excellent balance of humor and tenderness... well done, indeed.

Surprisingly sweet and interesting from a character standpoint.

and, of course, totally hot. Good work.

I have literally been waiting for someone to make a Lloyd/Colette/Sheena lemon for *years*. So far, everything seems to be good. I like that you refuse to take things too seriously, though I doubt Lloyd's thoughts would ever be "I am the MAN!"

Anyway, glad to see you've updated, and I eagerly await more.

Booya, that was beautiful baby.