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July 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i can not wait until you post again hope its sooon and i hope this review makes you happy great story
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November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the plot idea was very good, and the writing is very smooth, however...9 and 11 inch cocks? Maybe it's just that that sort of thing doesn't do it for me, but it just makes the story less believe-able. To be bluntly honest it made me cringe a little.. However, you write very well, so good luck on the rest of your fiction writing.
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September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! that was awesome!!!! is there abyway i can get this stupid site to tell me when you update? *ish new here* '-.- sorry. please, tell me if you are going to update!!!!
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September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The plot is good.
The story, and ideas are interesting. . . .
I couldn't get past chapter/part 2 because of how Out Of Character Riku and Sora sound. Not their actions, the language they are using. . . The names ::shiver::
I'm sorry. Good luck with this.
The story, and ideas are interesting. . . .
I couldn't get past chapter/part 2 because of how Out Of Character Riku and Sora sound. Not their actions, the language they are using. . . The names ::shiver::
I'm sorry. Good luck with this.
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September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE DAMN YOU!
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September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
For some reason I think Leon (since sora did wonder what it was like with leon)and Riku should fuck sora somewhere public where people stop and watch (type of thing)- ya'know Kinky thoughts xD
and i dont think you should listen to Anorexic Muffinz its fine the way it is at least for me <.<
and i dont think you should listen to Anorexic Muffinz its fine the way it is at least for me <.<
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August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
XD I wish I knew how to say hot in another word....mmm~ delicious. XD no that sounds too kinky. Okay, well I guess you understand that I really liked the chappie, heheh. The sickness was cute :] Just can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you~
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August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The intensity of greatness this story has grows with each chapter. ^^ Its delightful. You manage to find a pleasing balance of sex scenes, and character interaction (that isn't in relation to sex >>). Keep it up please!
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August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
CAN'T WAIT FOR THE Ultra kinky chapter! UkeSora!
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August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
8D wooooow! really. It's hard to keep my mouth closed~ hahaha, bitch.
Thanks for updating so fast x3 gosh! everything was just so hot!
Thanks for updating so fast x3 gosh! everything was just so hot!