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Holy crap! Please update soon! I love this!

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Nice story, SubBax. Maybe a little short, but great scenario and descriptive writing. Keep going. Try doing something similar to what you did with your other story: draw things out a bit - more situations, more chapters etc. That whole sexua massage interogation scene was good - why not try the same thing with Lara

Very well-written so far. There is a lot of potential here, and I hope you do continue with a long and enjoyable story. I look forward to see what will come next and eagerly await the rest of the story.

Thank you Streti for the info. I was wondering about that. And thank you all for your reviews. I am trying to make this story as long as I possibly can, and get it onto the site as quickly as I can, but I have had a lot to do. So I apologize if you're waiting a while to find out what happens to Lara and the three guards next. I promise as soon as the next chapter is finished, which should be within the next week, it will be uploaded. Thanks again.

Nice story. Good to know that ancients stone guards still have the decency to give their visitors a good fuck and a shower of sperm.

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Yay! A new Lara fic! So far it is very promising and well-written, I will be keeping tabs on this one!