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November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice little story, though I couldn't help but think that the girls were really talking way too much while they were having sex. That may just be personal preference, though.
On a more serious note, try to avoid character bashing. In my opinion, a fanfic author should at least treat even their most hated character fairly (or just ignore them). However, sometimes I get the feeling not everybody agrees with this radical notion. ;)
On a more serious note, try to avoid character bashing. In my opinion, a fanfic author should at least treat even their most hated character fairly (or just ignore them). However, sometimes I get the feeling not everybody agrees with this radical notion. ;)